Thursday, 1 September 2011

feedback and thoughts over break

Feedback was very positive during my critique in week 6. My ideas and strategy are strong, though I feel like my 'coded system' still needs a lot of work. There were comments that my street furniture images were too 'passive,' which I concur with. I have been wrestling with this idea of street furniture, and am not sure whether I want to restrict myself only to this.

I want to think about my 'system' as a series of conceived spaces, textures, sounds and aesthetics/materiality. A material (like the coded red brick, or fabric/concrete surface manipulations), a signature puncture within volumes of space, water as a key sound, and the moves cut, thrust and slide as key moves to my formal language. I want to look closely at my 20 chosen locations and find out what they need.


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